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sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Mon Sep 13, 2004 4:39 am

<a name="planetz-file"></a><a href="http://perso.wanadoo.fr/seb.warm/sjukdo ... .mp3"><img src="/forums/images/listen_icon.gif" border="0" alt=" Song"> Song</a> <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Genre: Electro Rock <a name="planetz-tag"></a>Uses: Pulsar Effects,Pulsar Synths copyright © 2004 sjukdom _____________________________________ Hello all,

First post to present the last song we did. Still have to work on it, however.

Any comment will be appreciated

)

sebastien

other songs there:
http://www.sjukdom.fr.fm

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nprime · Post by **nprime** » Mon Sep 13, 2004 11:08 am

Welcome to PlanetZ!

Production sounds good.

You have created a very complete atmosphere.

It is difficult to critique, it is so outside of anything that I have done/listened to. 10 points for original sound!

I don't not like it...?

R

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marcuspocus · Post by **marcuspocus** » Mon Sep 13, 2004 11:40 am

Pretty hot, like it

Reminds me of the cure. The cure hasn't got half that dark/trash/hard feel, but still, it kind of reminds me the cure "ambiance" of my 16th.

Nice prod anyway

Post by **hubird** » Mon Sep 13, 2004 7:52 pm

I don't like the singing (too much drama, to my taste), but the sounds are remarkable, and very great

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braincell · Post by **braincell** » Mon Sep 13, 2004 9:59 pm

Sounds like nine inch nails but in an odd way slowed down.

sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Tue Sep 14, 2004 3:48 am

thank you for your comments.

The Cure and NIN do influence us...
Actually I really love NIN (especialy reagarding the sound) and the singer loves the Cure...

Thanks again,

sebastien

Counterparts · Post by **Counterparts** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 10:09 am

sjukdom wrote:
Still have to work on it, however.

Dunno about that - although not the type of music I would normally listen too, I was well impressed with every aspect of it; the original sounds, the singing, the atmosphere and the quality of the production.

Top!

Royston

sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:10 pm

Counterparts wrote:
Dunno about that - although not the type of music I would normally listen too, I was well impressed with every aspect of it; the original sounds, the singing, the atmosphere and the quality of the production.

Well... it is very pleasant to hear that kind of comment... But i have difficulties to really finish a song... i always think i can do better, and i know that particular song could be better...

Anyway, thanks again for having listened to our work.

S.

Post by **garyb** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:41 pm

ghost pirates?
well done.

sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:54 am

garyb wrote:
ghost pirates?

hmmm... what does this mean ?
(i'm afraid my english is not si good...)

s.

Post by **garyb** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 12:04 pm

sounds kinda like the music of ghost carribean pirates. there is a sound like the creaking and groaning of a wooden ship and some wave noise.

strictly a good natured comment. the second line is my message.

sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:16 pm

garyb wrote:

strictly a good natured comment. the second line is my message.

thanks !

s.?

Post by **hubird** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 7:57 pm

[s.?]?

sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:51 am

hubird wrote:
[s.?]?

you're right, it's even better with brackets !

I do love punctuation...

[s.?]

Ricardo · Post by **Ricardo** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:29 am

Not bad at all!
The snare sound is wrong though, and such a shame because all the other drums are great.

next to nothing · Post by **next to nothing** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 12:43 pm

curious about your name, u dont happen to have norwegian friends?

sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 3:38 pm

hehe !

actually i chose this name because i wanted a name which begins by a S and contains a k (i had already chosen the police and found the k very "elegant"). As i owned a 7-language dictionnary, I found this word (which means "disease") and which sounds a bit like the drum part in The Beatles' "Come Together"...

But I thought it was Swedish, and not Norwegian... maybe the word exist in both language...

s.:]#

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Post by **hubird** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:17 pm

ok, talking about your name now...I placed a ? behind the s.? just because of your ? , not because of the s. .
i asked myself why a ? behind the name shortcut?
And both my [ ] where meant as ' ' .
that was all

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sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:27 pm

sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 4:28 pm

Ricardo wrote:
Not bad at all!
The snare sound is wrong though, and such a shame because all the other drums are great.

Thanks !
I think you're right about the snare (i suppose you are talking of the one at the beginning of the song). I will change it, i think...

s.:/;