first song post

eliam · Post by **eliam** » Tue Sep 14, 2004 11:27 am

yes, flautist is the right word, sorry for the typo... Nprime, let me hear your track and I might be inspired to play on it.

paulrmartin · Post by **paulrmartin** » Tue Sep 14, 2004 2:27 pm

If anybody's interested I play the huitar

Nice track ! I want to hear more high frequencies.

eliam · Post by **eliam** » Tue Sep 14, 2004 4:05 pm

wool! I clay the blarinet doo!

bassdude · Post by **bassdude** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 8:14 am

This is very well done. I don't think it needs to be brightened up as it would take away from the mood that is setup IMO. The amount of reverb is ok but I think you just need to ride the level more i.e. make more use of automation to help tame it in appropriate spots.
Very nice.

And if I hadn't heard Moby's stuff before this track I would have thought "Geez that Moby sounds alot like Babble". Thank Bob you can't patent musical styles!

Babble · Post by **Babble** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 10:36 pm

Eliam, i am please to hear you like my piece of work! I hear what you're saying about a first melody taking precendence in the song. There seems like there is somthing which can break up the song, but fit right in distracting you from the rest, but blending in at the same time. Good review!
Bassdue, i would also agree in that the reverb is nice but i guess would work in certain spots and actually could change the repetitiveness a little. I think i still have quite a bit of work to do with this song tweakingwise as well as maybe adding another fitting vocal

The one thing that gets me with this song is that the repetitiveness of the vocals doesn't bother me. For me it's almost like the beat in any song; repetitive, but eventually accepted as part of the song after playing it for so long. The part that begins to get focused is the strings/pads which i thought i would put the most feeling into... not sure if all of this is being worded right. Hopefully you know what i mean. Thanks for the responses to this song, i'm quite interested in all of your views!

wayne · Post by **wayne** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 11:42 pm

The one thing that gets me with this song is that the repetitiveness of the vocals doesn't bother me.

agreed. that is what this song is about, for me.

that line, repeated in that way, starts to get very spooky after a little while, and one begins to ask questions...very evocative.

good job!

bassdude · Post by **bassdude** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:23 am

Same here. It works very well as it is.

sjukdom · Post by **sjukdom** » Fri Sep 17, 2004 2:18 pm

excellent song !